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[CBiscuit]

I haven't read the novels you mentioned. Before you borrow any of my girl characters, unless you have read all of my stories, you need some background first. Kim in this story, which is a 5 part one so far, is a carry over from the story Prison Guard, which also has several more parts to go. Allison, the prostitute in Prison Guard, is also featured in the story Runaway. Kim and Allison are the only characters I have created that cross over between different stories. The couple The Prowlers, that debut in The Perfect Couple, are also in Perfect Storm Parts 1 & 2 and Halloween which are Prowlers adventure stories of the same series.

One thing that you might want to check out is how the number of views diminishes with each part of most multiple part stories. One part stories seem to do best. Chloro Dorm had thousands of views. Part 2 had only a few hundred! The only exception was the Part 4 conclusion of Dangerous Prey which had the most views of the 4 parts. This had a surprise ending. Most people either don't come back for the sequels or lose interest if the story goes on too long.

The first story I posted here The Conditioner was sexually explicit and didn't do as well for some reason. I also posted explicit versions of the stories on other sites and they did not do well either. I never went in that direction again and no one has complained. Nuf said.