Amethyst Episode 3

[larrydude]

Its always fun to read a story here!

[CBiscuit]

Interesting, although complicated, story line. Good knockouts. I like the Taser, followed by the cloth. Also the injection finished off by the cloth with ether. The teen with the drugged drink, followed by the clear mask was good too. Then of course the darts in the car...

[swrazor]

was it too complicated to enjoy or follow cb?

[CBiscuit]

Of course not, but I had to go back and re-read a few things to put it together. I'm just not used to doing that here! It's kind of like reading a novel. Also I can't always read the entire story segment without being interrupted, due to my work. That is the real problem, and I sometimes have to wait a few days until I have time to read the entire section at one time to really enjoy the plot and the KO's all together.

[swrazor]

thank so much for the critique and reply CB and larrydude. Ihave one more volume of repackaged stories to get people caught up in the mini sleepy novel. Then its all new stuff after that.