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I'm finally back and catching up. Wow! This is great writing. From the lesbian seductions, to the bedtime story flashback. The water/chloro switch was great too. I might have had her pass out for a while from the spilled chloro, and then wake up and do the switch, but that's such a minor point in the scheme of things!
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